Logo for My Personal Business - JK Design & Marketing
rufusbabe | Wed, 12/07/2011 - 04:45
Brief from client
Just want something simple to convey fun but professional. Want the logo to complement my designs rather than compete with them.
6 Comments
I like the first concept
Thanks MrMAU2. :)
JK handwritten acronym looks pretty nice, congrats but.... there are other problems that cannot be overlooked.
The best and cleanest version is one on the left (without black rectangle).
The main problem with it is underlying typography. It's just not fitting your acronym style, it's too thick and crowded and for the love of god I cannot think why did you use that underlined 'and'.
If you want to improve this you need to change typography to less thick and cold one that is more elegant and pleasing. And, please loose that 'and' with underline. Use a nice ampersand symbol.
The handwritten part works, the rest needs to be simpler.
I agree that perhaps the text need to be simplified. But if nothing else....KERNING.
i like it