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portal4

Brief from client 

logo to replace portal of the government of Puerto Rico.

just want critique

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hueroth's picture
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Font, hard to read already , without the warp thing you did. I advice you tu use "type on a path" if you really want to keep it round. Your font is not suitable for a modern logo, maybe for a crest from 1700 but today we are living in a speedy way, nobody will read that, as you maybe didn't read the feedback we gave you before.
The blue bubble is distorted, use your shift key to make perfect regular shapes, don't try to make them perceptual. The tower is almost undetectable , it breaks away ...not good, use a simple solid form with no such details as you did here. At smaller scales this will be just a sum of ink splatters. At that window is a frog ? why ? what ?
I must try to remeber you of this : http://www.brandsoftheworld.com/sites/default/files/portal_official_de_g... go in this way ......Also you can use the file i put here, I know it is not perfect but as an idea is more than enough

astramaria's picture

dear hueroth thank you so much for the idea,it has been very helpful

Dltd's picture
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That is dreadful.

As I replied last time:

Theo Brockmann's picture
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I think you may need to have someone else design this logo. What you did is not good at all, - sorry.

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Yeah, you might want to have someone else do this for you! If you're not a graphic designer, you should definitely just hire someone to create a logo for you. I think it's cool that you've kept trying but maybe this is just not your strong suit!!?

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You should never give up but also know when to step aside, I think your still making it to over complicated, some of the best logos are very simple easy for the person to digest. try to keep your logo down to 1-2 colors then if you feel the need make it 4-color
is there a little pyramid person in the window?

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I do not like at all, try with another idea.

razerrath's picture
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I can hardly read the text and don't like the symbol. The tower cannot be recognized at first glance.

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