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Cabin
armasescuroxana | Wed, 09/12/2012 - 18:13
Brief from client
The client wants something handwritten; witha a cabin, mountains, trees and a river
I think all you need to do here is have this perfected in tiny ways such as some of the text enters the other text and there is a dot in the picture right of the middle tree.
That emblem is good looking but it doesn't work as a classic logo. In my opinion a real logo should be able to work in black and wite too, in fact the best thing to do is to design in black and white and color the ready stuff in the end. This is more like a picture with some text. The drawing is cute on the other hand, I like it a lot. There is some mistake at the top of the tallest tree, you should clean up that little mess. The company name is a big problem here, you did not align it anywhere, just droped it down and thus it doesn't work with the graphic. Also there is too much space between the lines. Very bad typography.
I agree, clean up the tallest tree. Also I'd crop out that third tree that sticks out of the logo. It bothers me a little bit, but thats just me. I like the picture though!
Usually if you want to go for something handwritten, I would check out some fonts that have some more equal kerning, because they tend to be hard to read. Center out your font a bit, also it may work better if its below the logo, but that's just me.
Thank you all for the huge help; i knew the typography was bad, but still don't know how to make it a lot better; right now i am studying it. So; thanks again and i uploaded 2 versions of typography
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I think all you need to do here is have this perfected in tiny ways such as some of the text enters the other text and there is a dot in the picture right of the middle tree.
That emblem is good looking but it doesn't work as a classic logo. In my opinion a real logo should be able to work in black and wite too, in fact the best thing to do is to design in black and white and color the ready stuff in the end. This is more like a picture with some text. The drawing is cute on the other hand, I like it a lot. There is some mistake at the top of the tallest tree, you should clean up that little mess. The company name is a big problem here, you did not align it anywhere, just droped it down and thus it doesn't work with the graphic. Also there is too much space between the lines. Very bad typography.
I agree, clean up the tallest tree. Also I'd crop out that third tree that sticks out of the logo. It bothers me a little bit, but thats just me. I like the picture though!
Usually if you want to go for something handwritten, I would check out some fonts that have some more equal kerning, because they tend to be hard to read. Center out your font a bit, also it may work better if its below the logo, but that's just me.
Thank you all for the huge help; i knew the typography was bad, but still don't know how to make it a lot better; right now i am studying it. So; thanks again and i uploaded 2 versions of typography
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