Vaimò
CarmineDM | Mon, 07/01/2013 - 18:47
Brief from client
Car Sharing
Second version of the logo. I tried to correct the highlighted errors in the first version. I hope that the logo made so it is more balanced.
Logo consists of two opposing arrows which should give you a sense of direction.
Waiting for your comments.
8 Comments
I think my concept better portrays what the customer is looking for,
it is clean, elegant, well composed, fonts are crisp, clear and easy to understand, the car is cut in half showing sharing and the arrow in the rims gives the car a sense of movement within the piece. Over all i think i did a wonderful job and i do not mind if you would like to use it.
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lol
Can tell if serious or just trolling =)
HAHA Trollololol I had too...
I was a little hyper yesterday.
eerrrr wtf!!
All joking aside Carmine I do think that this version is better than version 1 but it still has some ways to go. I like how you have the font not falling off into oblivion, but to me the symbol feels very heavy and big. This is a good sample to pass by the client but i would also try something a little different if you could, the symbol kind of gets lost when it is scaled down (look at the thumbnails to the right.)
It´s a little bit better, but i insist in having less of the triangle shapes inside the arrows, maybe instead of those triangles you seem to use because they are "trendy" you could use the silhuete of a car or car keys ... anyway keep working on it, and if you can listen to some feedback from your client