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Instead of reposting the same logo three times in the comment section, why don't you first say "hello guys" and give us a bit of context? It would help us giving you accurate feedback as well as be polite.
The lines under the U could be smoothed out with the H and N, because it will save the embroiderers' lives when its time to go on a jersey (I'm assuming this is a sports team logo).
I downvoted the colour because that combination always looked lifeless than sporty and energetic, but then again it could be the whole design that's weighing it down. I also understand that the colour scheme may not be entirely your choice.
I think the direction can be made simpler, right now, it seems like there's a lot going on. I'm a firm believer of using odd numbers when it comes to duplicate elements, it adds some imbalance to entertain the eye.
I also find the varying stroke thickness to disarrange the design a bit; you should find a median.
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Instead of reposting the same logo three times in the comment section, why don't you first say "hello guys" and give us a bit of context? It would help us giving you accurate feedback as well as be polite.
It made me laugh, not going to lie.
Thunder! Thunder! THUNDER!
Very good point , Charlie. I would post your comment three times then...
The lines under the U could be smoothed out with the H and N, because it will save the embroiderers' lives when its time to go on a jersey (I'm assuming this is a sports team logo).
I downvoted the colour because that combination always looked lifeless than sporty and energetic, but then again it could be the whole design that's weighing it down. I also understand that the colour scheme may not be entirely your choice.
I think the direction can be made simpler, right now, it seems like there's a lot going on. I'm a firm believer of using odd numbers when it comes to duplicate elements, it adds some imbalance to entertain the eye.
I also find the varying stroke thickness to disarrange the design a bit; you should find a median.
Hope this helps.