Logotype Juegos Inflables
Marjorie Reyes ... | Thu, 10/29/2015 - 20:32
Brief from client
Empresa de arriendo de juegos inflables.
La empresa necesitaba un logo que representará movimiento, entretención, confianza y que fuera amigable con su público, pero que no se alejara de su primera actividad que se relaciona con juegos inflables. La propuesta fue hacer un logo que representara la actividad de cuando los niños están saltando en estos juegos.
Rental company inflatable games.
The company needed a logo to represent movement, entertainment, and confidence that was friendly to his audience, but not away from his first activity is related to inflatable games. The proposal was to make a logo that represented the activity when children are jumping into these games.
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Can you please translate your brief in English please, so everybody can understand and give an accurate feedback. Thanks.
ENGLISH
Thanks. It's not really that I need a translation (I can read Spanish) It's just a matter of politeness towards the people you're asking feedback from.
Thanks for letting me know that the information must be in English !, sorry , my translation is very basic .
Thanks for understanding!
So onto my review, then =)
So I like the general idea and the graphic style you picked fits well with the client.
Now the main problem I see here is that it's not really readable. The ligature between the F and I, for example, makes the I uneasy to identify. Also, the E and S are thicker than the rest of the characters, which kills any consistency any good logo needs.
I'm not really feeling the way the characters aren't properly aligned on the same baseline. I understand what you tried to do, and maybe it's just me, but it's just another complication your logo doesn't need.
Keep it up!
Thanks! :)