Shawali
Shawali | Sun, 12/06/2015 - 23:11
Brief from client
I was thinking about changing my profile picture and retire the old smoking skull.
What do you think guys?
It's a bit flimsy, I'm still working on my hand lettering skills.
3 Comments
Sorry, I read 'ha SwaLi'. The 'S' is bottom heavy so my mind ignores it as a letter at first.
Yea I'm not sure about this one Shawali... Needs a lot of refining, i dont think that splitting the name onto 2 lines is working plus the ligature for the "h" and "w" combining together like that looks rather forced and not very attractive in my eyes. The "L" also looks a bit like a "1" and both the "a's" and the "i" dont look they fit the design.
Keep sketching! :)
the way you stack all the lettering is actually very interesting however it makes hard to read the thing as a whole.