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Barks N' Bubbles
ErinsSonicYouth | Tue, 03/22/2016 - 00:04
Brief from client
Barks N' Bubbles is a local dog and puppy grooming salon that needs a serious brand redesign. Here's my take on a minimal logo for them.
I want to critique this, but I am too distracted by ALL THAT CUTENESS!!! =) I will say that the title feels off-center slightly- I think it is probably centered to the whole logo, but because of the optical illusion that is created with certain shapes like this one, it looks a tiny bit too far to the left. I think the symbol is a bit big compared to the title as well. It needs a better balance. I'm going to go hug my dog now!!
I think this is a great start. I would find a way to make the bubble a little more recognizable. I would also change the ears. The left one looks way smaller than the right one. That may be what is throwing the balance off a bit. If you look at two pictures of Schnauzers, one prick-eared and one flop-eared perhaps you can come up with better shape to the ears.
This is a very cute start but it could use some tightening up. The curve in the collar looks a bit uneven and your text should center with the collar. The eyes look off-center from the nose. The left ear looks like it could be smoothed out as well. Basically, at this stage you should go over it with a fine tooth comb and iron out all the little details.
What would the logo look like if you curved the name with the collar? At just a little more curve too. Just slightly. Is that Font - Grand Hotel? have you see "Flavors"? https://www.fontsquirrel.com/fonts/flavors
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I want to critique this, but I am too distracted by ALL THAT CUTENESS!!! =) I will say that the title feels off-center slightly- I think it is probably centered to the whole logo, but because of the optical illusion that is created with certain shapes like this one, it looks a tiny bit too far to the left. I think the symbol is a bit big compared to the title as well. It needs a better balance. I'm going to go hug my dog now!!
also, do you think the "bubble" could benefit from a small white highlight to make it more bubble and less flat blue spot? Just a thought!
I think this is a great start. I would find a way to make the bubble a little more recognizable. I would also change the ears. The left one looks way smaller than the right one. That may be what is throwing the balance off a bit. If you look at two pictures of Schnauzers, one prick-eared and one flop-eared perhaps you can come up with better shape to the ears.
This is a very cute start but it could use some tightening up. The curve in the collar looks a bit uneven and your text should center with the collar. The eyes look off-center from the nose. The left ear looks like it could be smoothed out as well. Basically, at this stage you should go over it with a fine tooth comb and iron out all the little details.
What would the logo look like if you curved the name with the collar? At just a little more curve too. Just slightly. Is that Font - Grand Hotel? have you see "Flavors"? https://www.fontsquirrel.com/fonts/flavors