Hion Vapors

You have a major composition problem here. Look at all this empty space right in the center of your logo. "Vapors" looks pretty lonely there.

Everything seems pretty much random here, all the curbs, the horrendous font alteration. Remember to always sketch before using any software.

Good luck.

Also the cloud looks very clip-arty. Try for something a bit more modern.

Agreed with the smart guys above, Vapors is very randomly placed, its also to small as it is.

The clouds are also taking over. They shouldn't dominate your name. It's self defeating. You have a cool opportunity here with the subject matter. Sketch away until something grabs you. You don't have to be great with a pencil to at least visualize your ideas. Blueprints come before foundations get poured. ;)

Hi Guys,

Thank you so much for your feedback, after analyzing your comments I went back to try other methods and approaches to the logo. I went ahead and sketched some new ideas, modeled it in Maya and rendered it with some post work I came up with this latest version. Hope you like. Thanks for the feedback in advance :)