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Oceanic Water
Abbas Naqvi | Sun, 06/10/2012 - 22:06
Brief from client
The name brief for it self ...
A young and trendy logo for a Drinking water company.
Idea is to highlight freshness and yet co relate it to mother nature.
idea is all right but it reminds me of a cleaning product, thats because the colors and the shadow in the brand name..
and it was a bit hard to read.. :O
buttt you are almost there.
much better! the spacing between the letters is better but still think they would look nicer joined up, also the spacing between the letters on the strapline look better on Version 1 in my opinion
I liked the colors, seems pretty fresh to me. But I thought the drops were weighed in a bit soon. Maybe try to organize them apart from the text? I think it will relieve a bit.
And I think the font of second text was not very well there, I believe that a sans serif will get better.
I like the shape and colors, I'm not big on the swooshes. If the client wants green maybe you could try making the "Pure Drinking Water" green? I'd also play with subduing the gradient just a SMALL amount. Just a few thoughts, it's not a bad logo at all.
Much improved. I would still be nice to connect the letters in "ceanic". The bevel effect on the arcs is a little too much. You could loose that and it might add more impact to the brand name. Or loose the top arcs altogether and replace with water droplets that also create the dot of the "i"
for a water bottle that will look classic on it... i dont hate the idea, actually it seems related to "OCEAN, DRINKING WATER" stuff quite well..
but i wonder, how does the bottle look like (shape and sticker around)??
may be it can help u get the FORM or the CURVES needed to be used in the logo...
24 Comments
Good concept with vibrant colors and look more cool and fresh.
if you leave it like that it would be perfect for me :D. Very good job sir Abbas
thanks hueroth even i like after putting these curve lines just waiting for client feedback
idea is all right but it reminds me of a cleaning product, thats because the colors and the shadow in the brand name..
and it was a bit hard to read.. :O
buttt you are almost there.
Stop right there, its done!
much better! the spacing between the letters is better but still think they would look nicer joined up, also the spacing between the letters on the strapline look better on Version 1 in my opinion
Looks great! Vast improvement from version 1
do u really need that arcs? Just that O is perfect!
yes MarceloDMnzs client want green color somewhere ...
yes MarceloDMnzs client want me to use green color somewhere ...
Great job. Love bouth!
try eliminate or reduce the darkness in the oceanic typography, and i don`t like the splashes or drops,
I liked the colors, seems pretty fresh to me. But I thought the drops were weighed in a bit soon. Maybe try to organize them apart from the text? I think it will relieve a bit.
And I think the font of second text was not very well there, I believe that a sans serif will get better.
I love this one its way better than the previous version i would probably buy this water based off the design.
I like the shape and colors, I'm not big on the swooshes. If the client wants green maybe you could try making the "Pure Drinking Water" green? I'd also play with subduing the gradient just a SMALL amount. Just a few thoughts, it's not a bad logo at all.
I love it, good job.
Like this one better than the rainbow version, the O is awesome and is strong enough on its own, the swoosh is not needed but does not hurt either.
Try and see reducing the gradient in the text, it might make it brighter..
Much improved. I would still be nice to connect the letters in "ceanic". The bevel effect on the arcs is a little too much. You could loose that and it might add more impact to the brand name. Or loose the top arcs altogether and replace with water droplets that also create the dot of the "i"
Perfect! Just one tiny objection: the font for the small text doesn't fit, you something more "liquid".
for a water bottle that will look classic on it... i dont hate the idea, actually it seems related to "OCEAN, DRINKING WATER" stuff quite well..
but i wonder, how does the bottle look like (shape and sticker around)??
may be it can help u get the FORM or the CURVES needed to be used in the logo...
Yes, compared to the rainbow it's much better. I would though avoid that classic Photoshop effect for letters.
much better but colors of type still unlike
That looks great, only I'm not sure that I'd feel particularly eager to drink it.
Excellent, it´s looks better than the previous logo