Aldiana Prod

Nah, this is not working at all.

Way too complicated, the idea is super not original and the composition is very messy.

In my opinion you can undo the lens and try these two fonts to see what happens.

I'll go against the grain on this one and say, although the idea is not original, I still enjoy the idea. The only problem is that it does not read like a lens at a smaller resolution and the color does not sit well with the type portion of the logo. I would also consider a heavier font type on the outer treatment as again, it gets lost on a smaller resolution, Good idea, execution could be better. But I do like the treatment of the lens overall as a standalone piece.