Archer Printing
SimplePixel | Sat, 11/05/2016 - 19:25
Brief from client
Personal Project
I have 3 different version of this logo, but the most detailed is this one.
I need to improve it and i would appreciate it if you can point something that is wrong with it or needs to be improved.
Thank you so much in advance.
7 Comments
Without an arrow in that thing, he is going to snap that bow! :)
Yes, I know the colours are arrows, but I can't stop thinking about how he is going to break his bow when he lets go.
It sort of looks like he is wearing a sleeveless top, but his arms are a different colour than his face. He also has a bit of a chubby arm by his shoulder. Actually, his entire body could maybe be re-proportioned, he looks a bit off.
I still like the concept though, It is a great start.
Thank you so much for your critique, i really appreciate it. ^^
I will come back with a different version based on your opinion, somewhere tomorrow.
Thank you again!!
I think it would look good without the archer, and just the colorful arrows. Maybe play around with the shapes and placement
It's a total redesign, and i'm not looking for that in this design. Removing the archers would make it too simple and common in my opinion.
But thank you so much for your critique. I really appreciate it.
I think there are too many colors. The archer could be in black and white, so the colorful arrows stand out. Also, that quiver with arrows is trowing me off, i don't know why. Maybe leave it empty? Just some thoughts!
This logo creates visual saturation because of the endless elements that hold such as great number of colors, different lines and forms. On the other hand, the typography (Helvetica) doesn't creates a good composition in the logo.
I would try to simplify the logo by making the person just one color. So it's black against the rainbow. Could become simpler and more powerful.