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Yeah, what Shawali said. There's nothing really to salvage here, so I'd think about going back to the drawing board and see if you can come up with something that doesn't use such garish colors, no gradients, no keyboard (unless that's something integral to your design work somehow?) no white highlight effects on the font, etc.
Rofl, the comment shawali made on the keyboard made me laugh, mostly because I thought the same thing when I saw it XD
From the looks of it, it seems to be a reminiscent of an old blues style logo from the 50s. And if that's not what you're going for, then in short this logo is not very strong anyway.
The letters AY seem interesting so I would delete everything else and work with just the font by itself. That is of course after you remove all the gradients and bevels/emboss, which is a big nono in logo design!
View this change. note everything. I just start with this of the logos. I'm learning ... take away the keyboard because I'm not a pianist. Thank you for your comments
I would remove that inner white circle as well. Just leave it simple and flat. Don't try to over stylize it as it will just come out as cheesy. Oh, and don't forget to ax the keyboard in your new revision!
No need for me to reiterate the comments made by my peers. Thinking about salvage...you've got some interesting lines within the "A" and "Y" and a potential "play" button right in the middle. Perhaps just concentrate on a symbol and don't try and make it do everything.
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Ouch. This is painful to watch. Nothing works. It look like you threw all these weird shapes, acidic colors and crooked fonts to see what sticks.
And what the hell is this keyboard doing here? =)
Yeah, what Shawali said. There's nothing really to salvage here, so I'd think about going back to the drawing board and see if you can come up with something that doesn't use such garish colors, no gradients, no keyboard (unless that's something integral to your design work somehow?) no white highlight effects on the font, etc.
Rofl, the comment shawali made on the keyboard made me laugh, mostly because I thought the same thing when I saw it XD
From the looks of it, it seems to be a reminiscent of an old blues style logo from the 50s. And if that's not what you're going for, then in short this logo is not very strong anyway.
The letters AY seem interesting so I would delete everything else and work with just the font by itself. That is of course after you remove all the gradients and bevels/emboss, which is a big nono in logo design!
View this change. note everything. I just start with this of the logos. I'm learning ... take away the keyboard because I'm not a pianist. Thank you for your comments
I would remove that inner white circle as well. Just leave it simple and flat. Don't try to over stylize it as it will just come out as cheesy. Oh, and don't forget to ax the keyboard in your new revision!
Ty :)
:P
Still the keyboard? =)
No need for me to reiterate the comments made by my peers. Thinking about salvage...you've got some interesting lines within the "A" and "Y" and a potential "play" button right in the middle. Perhaps just concentrate on a symbol and don't try and make it do everything.
Yes :/
Too 80's lookalike to me