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buburuza eis

Brief from client 

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hueroth's picture
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the symbol is better than last time i saw it but the font of choice it terrible. Do not put it on to rows, make one line only, put the symbol on the front or in the top (center) of the main line and make it more vivid. The actual colors need to be more alive , eventually use complementary colors and a splash can be of use to add some juice.

Waffles's picture
233 pencils

That butterfly in the 'A' isn't doing you any favours. Take it out.

jtrumm's picture
24 pencils

Sorry, I think your drawing is lacking and it's really holding you back. Truth is, it just looks like a big bug in a cone, which isn't very appetizing.

A good solution would be to make a more realistic looking ice cream and cone. Make the ice cream red, but play with the shade a little bit. Don't just do 100% red, put a little thought into it-- what red is pleasing to the eye but still says "ice cream?" Put a few black or dark brown polka dots in the ice cream for spots. Don't worry about making it look like a bug. When someone sees the red with dark spots, combined with the name or your store, they will automatically think lady bug, without SEEING a bug.

Google "ice cream logo" and you will find lots of inspiration, from how to draw the ice cream, to font choices, to layout solutions. Don't copy, just see what works and what doesn't. And do some research on logos and typography in general, it will be helpful :)

Like Waffles said, take the bug out of the A-- you already have one symbol, there is not reason to repeat it.

If you come up with something new, we'd love to see it!

Shawali's picture
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Yeah, you reached that point where you keep humping, but the girl's is long gone =)

You cling to that ladybug idea and just throw a whole bunch of terrible fonts, hoping that something cool comes out of it. But the truth, the foundation of your logo are way too flimsy. You need to restart from scratch. I keep repeating myself, but start with getting as much inspiration as you can, let it sink in and grab a pen and sketch. Don't stop until you find something really viable.

botw's picture
224 pencils

Please wait a few hours before you post new versions and always use the button in the right sidebar on your logo page to do so. This way you will get comments you can build on and you will keep the thread together. I did it for your last 3 logos now.

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