Business mountain logo
amina_des | Fri, 04/08/2016 - 17:29
Brief from client
The name of logo in arabic something like "business mountain". Trade comany in Gulf. My idea was to make a suitcase to look like mountain.
The name of logo in arabic something like "business mountain". Trade comany in Gulf. My idea was to make a suitcase to look like mountain.
I've tried to improve symbol. Does it look like a suitcase now?
6 Comments
this logo left me staring at the screen for a long time with nothing to say. This is not good, the logo sends very few things to me. I will not say anything about typography because i have no idea about the language. The logo seems bleak, empty, void of substance. Sadly i have no advice, i still have a blank expression on my face.
For symbol isn't working yet. Have you tried a not slanted briefcase? What's also really putting me off is that it really shows that you made this straight on the computer with the pencil tool in under 5 minutes. That's why I told you to the sketch before hand, trying to achieve some kind of human factor that is desperately lacking in your logo and leave our poor Hueroth with no expression on this sweet face =)
I still think there is potential in this logo but you're not quite there yet. Keep working on it!
The logo must be associated with it's name "business mountain". I made it slanted for this reason. I think i will try another idea because if i make a suitcase on a hill (not slanted), i think it's too typical, even if my suitcase symbol will be good.
Thanks everyone for critique
What about arrows rising up from behind the hill ?
It is an envelope now!
Now it looks more like a suitcase but less like a mountain. Keep trying.
I would suggest a more interesting font, this choice even though is nice but it is so overused.
Have you tried using a mountain in the symbol with the suitcase as part of it instead?