Camen Orchestra Logo
Matthew Kurnia | Sat, 11/24/2018 - 13:43
Brief from client
Incorporate music elements
This is a logo i made for an orchestra group. I'm not very sure what "camen" means; the client didn't give any detail on what i meant. The logo is supposed to be a "C" with some violin components put into it. I changed the typeface to a simpler one, as suggested.
6 Comments
I see the elements of musicality in the symbol. I am not wild about your font choice for Camen. It is a little too fluffy for my taste and takes away from the symbol. See what others think. I think you need work on font choices, but I like the symbol.
I see the the iconis "C" as inspired. However, I agree that something this stylistically unique demands a simpler accompanying text solution. Simplify that and I'm betting you'll have a successful mark.
I would lighten the weight of camen just a bit. You don't want it to fight with the symbol. Think of it as heavy medium light in descending order. This font looks much better than the first.
I do like it. The symbol gives the right feeling of musicality. Although the type could work better with another font, I don´t have a problem with the current choice.
Congrats!
It's to be noted that the OP changed the font. It wasn't this one originally.
And the new one looks already a hundred times better.
Thanks for that! Now makes more sense :D