Central PA Careers
Aloss | Mon, 04/06/2015 - 15:31
Brief from client
Job board website for Central PA.
The client wished to have 2 colors, Navy Blue and Gold.
I was to create a logo involving a briefcase with modern type.
Also was to incorporate the phrase "Jobs. Internships. Careers."
8 Comments
Sometimes clients are wrong. You did what they asked for, but it doesn't really work. It is just the shape of the state with a piece of clip art put into it. I do like the keystone on the latch, but that's about as far as it goes. I would be interested in seeing what other ideas you sketched out.
I did not use clipart, thats for your input however.
sorry.
The symbol I see very weak, I think a lot of noise generates the right.
As I see the font kerning closing it could improve a bit.
The colors I like.
Sorry for my english.
It's too generic, play with it a bit, have fun, make it personal.
very good job! typography and style were very cool. Just need a little better in the symbol.
visit and your suggestion in my work ...
http://www.brandsoftheworld.com/critique/layout-idea-design
Dude, please don't post the exact same comment on every post just to have people comment on your own. That's kind of a dick-ish move. It just goes to show you don't give a rat's ass about other people's work.
I like the typography, but not the symbol. I agree that you should not try to stay so rigidly to the client's instruction. As a designer, it is your job to interpret their instruction into something that actually works...lol
One thought I have is you could combo the state and the briefcase...that is, a PA-shaped briefcase. That would simplify things a bit, and make your logo mark more unique. Just my .02