Cheese
Joe White | Wed, 06/12/2013 - 22:11
Brief from client
Quite self explanatory. Will be a business offering a wide variety of cheese, melted into gooey sandwiches. A tongue in check fun style but with a traditional feel.
Lots of development on this job, have kept this all under-wraps this time round.
9 Comments
One of the later groups, much more dev on the idea and the script previous to this too.
Love it! good use of typography.
The traditional look and feel is dominating more than the fun factor I feel.
(The T touching C makes it looks somehow like a G). Also, do you think the bottom tiny stroke looks as if it is just there?
Lovely!
Looks really cool Joe! i have to agree with what Mahyani has said though about the C and T touching making the C look a bit like a G! and about the bottom small bit of decor under truck kinda floating there for no reason. I however also feel that the ones you have done with a thinner ribbon around the edges looks better because they are not over powering the main text in the middle. with this one the thick ribbons looks a little to dominating.. The main text in the middle should be the first thing people look at then the ribbon round the outside.
I had put in some thought towards this, And I feel I should work up an in-between of the two banner widths I have done already. How ever I liked the way It looked somewhat Bold and youthful, rather than if it was small and elegant. It wants to look classic, but be fun.
Very cool! And I agree with Matt and Mohannad about "c" & "t". You have great personal style.
How do you know my name :|
Haha!
I never thought about it looking too much like a G, I find it hard to see it myself, But will look into a nice way to separate the distinction. Most likely get rid of the lil curl at the bottom too.