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Surani | Fri, 03/07/2014 - 10:18

Brief from client 

Logo for a high rise apartment, which has a unique feature of each house contains a garden area with a mango tree.

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Alexi Vasiliou | Fri, 03/07/2014 - 10:45

Surani, this is a lovely design, it's not free of issues though.

Firstly, it doesn't look like a mango tree, which might not be too much of a problem.

I think you may need to make the text bigger, otherwise you'll have legibility issues. Stacking the text could help. You could even have a version where the 'I' in 'point' is the icon. In fact, if you stacked the text, this could work really well as the 'I' and 'E'.

It also looks a bit like a green carrot.

What does the highrise look like?

I think this has got bags of potential and hope you still have time to develop it.

Surani's picture
Surani | Fri, 03/07/2014 - 11:16

Hi, really appreciate your inputs.
Building is actually a tall cubic form, with 2 apartments in each floor, and those will be placed diagonally in continuos floors.
I took the shape of mango leaf (which is kind of identifiable), not the tree. And took the basic form of side view.
Was thinking to take it forward as an iconic logo, without using the name. But I agree whenever the name has to be used with is, your suggestions are great.

Thanks a lot. :)

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mahayni | Mon, 03/10/2014 - 13:46
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I like the idea. I agree that the copy is small, and yes it looks like a carrot.
I think this can be a good logo with some improvements.

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TommySkills | Tue, 03/11/2014 - 04:27
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I like the idea! I think you should add some yellow/orange to incorporate the feeling of a mango within the garden.. Good luck, Go ahead and try a different symbol approach.

P.S Since I read Alexi Vasiliou's comment about a carrot all I see is a Green carrot now haha

- TS

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adskumar | Sat, 05/03/2014 - 04:09
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good one.

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