Brief from client
Here's my logo for my outdoor/sustainable clothing line. the market audience is M/F ages: 16-35. Any suggestions would be very helpful!
Here's my logo for my outdoor/sustainable clothing line. the market audience is M/F ages: 16-35. Any suggestions would be very helpful!
5 Comments
The idea for this and its execution feels weak. Text is way too cramped and seems illogically placed. Colors clash a bit as well.
Did you do any prior sketching for this?
Thanks for the feedback, any suggestions?
I actually like the colors, but agree about symbol and type. Its like your symbol looks stretched wide and your type is cramped and tall. They don't work together. The mountains are a bit generic also. They need character!
Thanks, I totally agree, I'm thinking of just scraping the whole idea, do you have any other suggestions. especially with the font
The font and the sun, they are not centred. Well, one of them isn't. It throws the entire thing off. :)