Design 4 You
simo1995 | Sun, 11/04/2012 - 18:55
Brief from client
Embroidery, Screen Printing, Signs Printing
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3 Comments
Abort! Abort!
Sorry but nothing works here.
- There are way too many elements (The D and Y, the 4, the weird symbol on the right, the subtext)
- Too many different fonts, which really don't complement each others. Don't use well known fonts like Aardvark (Hard Rock Café) or any font you find on Dafont. The typeface for the subtext looks like a deformed version of Impact. Never EVER alter the shape of a font. It's highly unprofessional and super not cool!
- The kerning is way off.
- The little squirty shape on the right doesn't make any sense and is badly designed.
- The colors are atrocious.
- Too many strokes with different weights.
- The name, Design 4 You, is super cheesy, punny and very 90's. It sounds like the name of a bad boys band (like there were good boy bands)
To sum it up, this represents everything one should not do when designing a logo.
Sorry if I'm a bit harsh but that's how you learn.
Good luck!
*points to Shawali's critique*
Yes. Yes, everything he said.... This does not work at all.
ditto!