Eggbomb
Gigafrost | Sat, 09/15/2012 - 21:12
Brief from client
Hatching new and explosive ideas. Kaboom! Cluck cluck...
Overhauled and went into a more serious approach. A more realistic egg shell is drawn and one yolk is used this time. Instead of a cartoony bomb i went with a missile. Critique is welcomed.
9 Comments
The first version was a lot better. This one is too complicated, you need too much time to figure out what's on the picture. I don't understand why don't you just go on with the first version and try to bring out something of that.
Thanks for the critique, will definitely look into simplifying it.
I also think the 1st one was better.. I don't see egg white...
maybe try a more off-white for the egg, not grey.
I gotta agree with what folks have already said- I really liked the direction you were headed with that first logo, but this one not so much! I don't think it's as nice looking, not as effective, etc. I think you should go back to your other one and make improvements on that one instead!?!
Thanks for the critique, funny you guys mentioned that because I thought the first version was waaaay too simple. I guess im over-thinking it! I will see if I can make a revision.
The problem might be that there is too much going on. Your text will help explain the concept, you don't necessarily have to have a literal image to go with it. Maybe work on the exploding egg theme and refine it.
rather than having an egg and a bomb, why not try to create an eggbomb all in one, Could do the circle shaped bomb as the egg with the detonator cord coming from it and text underneath in smal thus making the logo way more simple and effective?
Ahhh yes! That makes sense, I will see if I can make an effective logo off of that idea. Without making it look like a sperm or something lol