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Flawless Face & Beauty
nardus101 | Tue, 09/11/2012 - 23:25
Brief from client
Logo for a company doing mainly facials & body massages.
Logo for a company doing mainly facials & body massages.
I appreciate Monito's attempt, but I think the overall idea of cutting into the vertical stroke of the initial "F" is a bad one. I'm not sure there could ever be a proper balance of positive and negative space to pull this off, especially between the letterforms. And, the fact that it's script makes it even more difficult. I might try adding a think and thin "hand-drawn" profile as the cursive element, and complement it with new typography. The profile is a great element, I just don't think it should be so tightly combined with a letterform.
5 Comments
I like, simple, original, I like the silhouette on the F
My QUICK revisions...
interesting idea
Looks good, but I would use softer colors -
agree with mousiu Theo Brockmann,
I appreciate Monito's attempt, but I think the overall idea of cutting into the vertical stroke of the initial "F" is a bad one. I'm not sure there could ever be a proper balance of positive and negative space to pull this off, especially between the letterforms. And, the fact that it's script makes it even more difficult. I might try adding a think and thin "hand-drawn" profile as the cursive element, and complement it with new typography. The profile is a great element, I just don't think it should be so tightly combined with a letterform.