Gas Monkey
Franklin Design | Mon, 04/30/2012 - 23:31
Brief from client
Branding for a company selling Motorsport & Extreme sports items.
(Note the logo has not yet been purchased, I am not the owner of this company name)
(Made some changes)
A monkey head with a gas mask on
So I had an issue with the mouth section and resizing, so I changed the nostrils , make the eyes bigger, and add a less detailed section to the mouth.
Personally I think this looks better and makes it more versatile, let me know what you think.
New typo also.
8 Comments
Not sure about the mouth. Everything else that was updated looks good. The type is okay...liked the size differences in version 1 between gas and monkey.
I prefer the smaller eyes (more menacing) I also prefer the vertical lines for the mouth. Instead of 8 thin lines.... why not try 4 thicker ones in the same triangular shape? That may work :) Other than that, still a fantastic logo! Oh and I prefer this font over the last.
Too literal. Nothing clever about the icon...brings no deeper meaning nor does it say extreme motorsports. It's just a monkey with a gas mask.
I appreciate that you just signed up to BOTW to critique this. So you think maybe I should start a fresh?
Ok
Any Ideas for me?
I prefer version 1
Really nice concept. I prefer this version, but try and make the ears bigger, it looks like a bold guy. the ears should be bigger that the mask's air tanks.The circles at the mouth look batter than the lines. And you can make the eyes even Bigger, just try it.
Also not bad, but Version 1 is better!
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