Gene Graphics.

I spoke w/ a fellow designer on this project.
she said she liked it but for me i feel i need more critiques before i make my final decision.

I am creating my personal new graphic design logo.

I have called this one, Gene graphics.
For those of you that dont know, my philosophy on graphic design stems from genetics.

This work of mine comes from the concepts of genetic DNA strands.

a Genetic strand, in common science terms not only makes up the entirety of a human. but also determines a person's specific gender,
race, color, physical features etc.

just like a dna strand determines the features persons body represents so much more does a A graphic design/Logo design determines the indication of what a business represents.

Logos and artwork are alot like DNA strands the signify something.

This is what we are about as a graphic design firm, we want to make our whatever graphic print to reflect what the companies want for themselves to represent.
if a company asks us to make them a new bakery logo for themselves,
what would best represent that??? a drawing of a knife and a slice of cake. because that icon is the make up of what that company represents...food! just like a strand of human Dna will represent whether that person is a boy or girl or how tall they will be.
its all about image.

Such features like a logos color, size, its i=message, will represent what a business company stands for, since they are representing their brand,

I haven't decided which of the two would be best recognized and easier to read