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Genetic Technology

AldoAzDesign | Sun, 11/11/2012 - 18:48

Brief from client 

Experiemental work

The mixture of blue and red, purple is created. I did a
relation between the color change and the genetic change,
to create a logo.

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saraqroxy | Mon, 11/12/2012 - 17:04
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For me this is hard to judge because of the GIANT BLACK BOX that you put behind your stuff. (Why not post a version that has black text on a white background, which is (I'm guessing) the main way it will be displayed anyway?)

I guess my main issues would be that it's too detailed (the grid pattern almost disappears NOW let alone if it gets any smaller) and the sphere things up and off to the side are oddly placed for me. I think you should pick one or the other- either a grid thing happening OR the spheres breaking apart thing. Not both.

The font you chose looks REALLY dated to me. Straight out of the 80's as far as I'm concerned, and "genetic" is really, really thin.

I'd break these two ideas apart, work on them each separately and with a new font. Both of them being together just looks thrown together and uneven.

And next time you upload one, pretty please make it larger and without a big black box!!!

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