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simple and clean design

12 Comments

luenib's picture
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If you keep the symbol clean it's going to look much better. That pencil point only brings disturbance.

Find a font that has more "personality". Try some sans-serif condensed first and use it on "Carlos Ferreira". Move "Design" to another line..

The colors are very weak, try some warm color combination.

G13Design's picture
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I'll give the idea and symbol thumbs up when you get that pencil off of there.

The symbol color is weak and the tag color doesn't work well with it.

The font doesn't work with the symbol either.

Pay attention to proportion in your design.

roxius's picture
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His pencil is much better than yours G13 logo

G13Design's picture
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Yeah- we all have our successes and failures.

But, at least mine are on here. I don't critique without also letting people critique me..

Where is your work, tough guy?

scander's picture
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im sorry the balance of your symbol rather the proportion is not good.

splashster's picture
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Gah, no pencils! Keep your graphic mark clean, colors are still not my cup of tea - you need better contrast or.... just make everything in b&w.
Not sure if this is the right typography, try it with everything uppercase and test how some different fonts work, maybe you can find something better for this.

botw's picture
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I think it's quite unique. I like it. Good work!

roxius's picture
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Find a better typography, this one's average, search for a really good. And try adding some shade to the pencil, not sure if it will get better, but give it a try.

stilez's picture
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u need to review and make better the symbol. find a more appropriate typo.

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The colours seem to slightly clash and the pencil does stop the fluidity of the whole logomark. I think its quite interesting but could be excecuted much better.

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Esta version es muy buena, solo me gustaria que integraras un poco mas el simbolo con la tipografia, por lo demas todo esta bien felicidades! :D

Alpreacher's picture
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Beautiful. Can be done better, of course. When it is small - looks fantastic, yet when you look at the big copy, there is something between the blue lines, pencil and font that waits to be updated. I honestly do not know what.Those lines reminded me of the legs of that beast on "Peugeot" logo. Finally - it is almost done. It's clean, it's simple. Try to look how it will look in practical life - t-shirts, car side etc, that can give you some hint on the final strokes.

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