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Hawd Media
Bariqo | Wed, 10/15/2014 - 15:35
Brief from client
A logo that has strong camel identity since Hawd is a region which is home to the largest number of camels in the world. It is located in eastern Ethiopia.
As a avid Camel smoker. I cant see anything but a Camel cigarette package. The left leg is also making me feel uncomfortable. The colors seem very off you got yellow, white blue and even red in there. Its chaotic. The used font here is also not working in my opinion.
Yeah, the leg make me think about a video that I saw, men attached the leg like this (I think it for the blood pressure) to cut the throat of the camel this make me really uncomfortable as well...
I agree that the first thing that popped into my mind was the Camel logo. And yes, that weirdly folded leg is very off putting. The camel looks like is about to loose his balance. And what is this white arc?
Thanks for the feedback guys. Appreciated and you do have valid points. It was my first sketch and I sort of wanted to see what others thought of it. I used the folded leg to be different :)
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As a avid Camel smoker. I cant see anything but a Camel cigarette package. The left leg is also making me feel uncomfortable. The colors seem very off you got yellow, white blue and even red in there. Its chaotic. The used font here is also not working in my opinion.
Yeah, the leg make me think about a video that I saw, men attached the leg like this (I think it for the blood pressure) to cut the throat of the camel this make me really uncomfortable as well...
This is very good logo, other than that I must appreciate the hard work put in for the logo.
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I agree that the first thing that popped into my mind was the Camel logo. And yes, that weirdly folded leg is very off putting. The camel looks like is about to loose his balance. And what is this white arc?
This is need way more thinking and sketching.
i think shawali's critique is enough for you.
Thanks for the feedback guys. Appreciated and you do have valid points. It was my first sketch and I sort of wanted to see what others thought of it. I used the folded leg to be different :)
A sketch, by definition, is made with a pen on paper. Stay away from your computer for a while and draw a few dozens ideas, if not more.
you really need to sort that leg out ! :)