Joral drivig school
Mniako | Thu, 04/17/2014 - 14:37
Brief from client
Driving school in belgium, driving lessons and theoretical lessons. Slogan - driving excellence
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18 Comments
LOVE IT!
Thank you Stephen
HAHA! Cool.
Thank you, John
Is IORAL or JORAL? except this confusing thing the best logo on this page :) grate!
Joral, letter 'I' never connects in middle i belive. Thank you )
Nice design. There are a couple of bits that are begging to be tweaked, but the main thing is the J doesn't read that well.
I would like to know about tweaks if its possible
Yes, of course, but in this case is the line up of the J that close and connect with the O. will be more convincing as a J if you connect the line down of the J. Try it
Conceptually, I'm wondering whether a bent cone is at odds with 'driving excellence', but I guess it's a bit of fun, so we'll ignore that.
Aesthetically;
Deleting the grey circle could help unify it with the text, they don't quite marry at the moment.
DRIVING EXCELLENCE looks a bit plonked on. Maybe it could follow the swoosh?
...oh, and finally there's a little fleck just above the mouth that you may as well fill in ;)
Tuppence in
Alexi Vasiliou, thank you for reply. Bended cone reffers to somekind of wizard hat. My first wip results were without grey circle, i found it more accurate with it. About "plonked" subtext, maybe i can agree with you, but didnt see any better solution for this.
I'll fix fleck futher, ty. But there is smile ) there
I prefer to straighten out my roads. ;) You know what I'm talking about.
I'm having second thoughts about the circle, it's growing on me.
Pretty nice logo you got there.
My main concern is that bent cone, as Alexi pointed out. In terms of strategy, I don't know if it really inspires trust. Also the fact that the magician seems to be sleeping, not what you really want to see in a driving school logo. You might want to reconsider that.
My other beef with this logo is the general composition. It doesn't seem well centered enough and looks a bit off balance.
You are definitely on the right track here in terms of general aesthetics.
Bon boulot, continue! =)
I like the idea, but I agree with the others, there's no point in repeating the observation. Looking foreword for version 2.
I would actually like to see the gray circle shifted up slightly. I think that will help balance out the image a little better. Right now it looks to be centered with the face, which isn't bad by any means. I just think with the large amount of the hat protruding from the top, it makes me notice how little the beard sticks out along with a large amount of negative space in the gray circle at the bottom. Shifting it up will balance out the negative space within the gray circle.
That's all I got. :)
Ty, helpfull!
Hehe, I like it.
I just think it is not easy to read, is it Joral?