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KiwiChoo Logo

KiwiChoo | Fri, 01/31/2014 - 13:27

Brief from client 

My Freelance Logo

So i need my own logo as i am starting to freelance.... i like clean graphics... any thoughts on this?

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Alexi Vasiliou | Fri, 01/31/2014 - 14:04

Hi Karein

It's nice, but clean would be stretching it.
Every brief on here seems to describe the design as clean. It seems to have lost it's meaning altogether in this industry, as I hear it being used time and time again, usually accompanied by the word 'simple'.

I think your logo would look instantly better if you deleted 'Designs' and the text underneath. Then make the biscuit (I assume it's a bitten biscuit) a contrasting colour.
I would also add some detail to the biscuit, maybe some white dots to the biscuit, like a Rich Tea biscuit.

Hope that helps ;)

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webhunter | Fri, 01/31/2014 - 14:58
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i don't think its that nice and it is not at all "clean"
At first why is your name up there? second, there is to much going on, the cookie, the "Design font" and then the absurd long subtitle.

just as sad above delete those things and you get a much more cleaner design.

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Alexi Vasiliou | Fri, 01/31/2014 - 15:36

My technique is like an archaeologist brushing away bits of dirt gently from a discovery.
Then you drove your bulldozer straight through it...lol!

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KiwiChoo | Mon, 02/03/2014 - 12:14

Hahaha lmao..... i am new at this so don't be too harsh ;) (maybe i need it)

Thanks though, i will come up with something!

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Alexi Vasiliou | Mon, 02/03/2014 - 16:52

There's no hiding when you're a designer. You have to form a thick skin.
I would say that 95% of my work doesn't see the light of day.

I look forward to seeing your next version.

I'll let you in to a secret...it's all in the preparation
Spend a day researching on a computer and drawing away from a computer.
Then spend a day doing anything but work on this and the day after get back to designing. Your brain will have designed it in your head on the day off. Sounds weird, but trust me on this, good ideas need incubating.

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SundraPr | Mon, 02/03/2014 - 18:10

Agree with what has been mentioned above.
I like the blue not a fan of the gray - but that is because I work with print. And gray is one of the hardest colors to match correctly. Unless you make is a % of Black or a PMS Gray.

I would really play on the cookie/biscuit Make it a watermark on everything.

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moizkiyani | Mon, 02/10/2014 - 14:25

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