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Logo Healthcare
Sananda Kumar | Tue, 10/06/2015 - 08:30
Brief from client
A logo which is simple, eye catchy, unique and with colors of healthcare.
Still not a fan of the subtext font. Remove also that useless grey line, centre everything. Reduce the size of the text, it's too prevalent as opposed to the word mark.
You just had to remove the red cross. I don't why you changed the negative space. It doesn't look good now.
That being said, just be sure that you won't have problems because your logo shows what could look like a christian cross.
And I'm still not a fan of the subtext font. First, what it says isn't really well thought through, in terms of copywriting (never use a negative in a tagline!). Second, choose a better font that this one.
Adding to the comments above your logo is getting into non-denominational church territory. I'd take a step back and start over, when you rework a design several times you can get stuck on forcing it to work and starting over gives you a fresh perspective.
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Remove the red cross and you're good to go.
Still not a fan of the subtext font. Remove also that useless grey line, centre everything. Reduce the size of the text, it's too prevalent as opposed to the word mark.
Keep it up, you're almost there!
thanks
Revised
You increased the size of the cross in the middle of the P and it doesn't look as good, if you notice the symbol should actually be symmetrical.
You just had to remove the red cross. I don't why you changed the negative space. It doesn't look good now.
That being said, just be sure that you won't have problems because your logo shows what could look like a christian cross.
And I'm still not a fan of the subtext font. First, what it says isn't really well thought through, in terms of copywriting (never use a negative in a tagline!). Second, choose a better font that this one.
Adding to the comments above your logo is getting into non-denominational church territory. I'd take a step back and start over, when you rework a design several times you can get stuck on forcing it to work and starting over gives you a fresh perspective.