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WOW!!!!!!!! what radical change!!!!!!!! Much , much, much better!!!! definitely the best version so far. Well, now the critique. In my opinion you have to replace the flowers that I ut a cross on. And work a little on the colors. And congratulations finally you are on the right way.
Let's say it's less terrible than the previous attempts.
What about these flowers? Is it a type of flower that are specifically from Malaysia? Or did you just put them there randomly? For me, they make me think more about Hawaï than South East Asia.
And what about the colors? What do they symbolize?
You're not quiet there yet but you're starting to head in the right direction.
Thank you Very Much for your comments :)
That flower - Hibiscus - one of the symbols of Malaysia.
Hibiscus - also have in the Hawaii and all South East Asia.
My next idea will be using one big hibiscus and less colors
Thank you for your critique again :)
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WOW!!!!!!!! what radical change!!!!!!!! Much , much, much better!!!! definitely the best version so far. Well, now the critique. In my opinion you have to replace the flowers that I ut a cross on. And work a little on the colors. And congratulations finally you are on the right way.
Let's say it's less terrible than the previous attempts.
What about these flowers? Is it a type of flower that are specifically from Malaysia? Or did you just put them there randomly? For me, they make me think more about Hawaï than South East Asia.
And what about the colors? What do they symbolize?
You're not quiet there yet but you're starting to head in the right direction.
Thank you Very Much for your comments :)
That flower - Hibiscus - one of the symbols of Malaysia.
Hibiscus - also have in the Hawaii and all South East Asia.
My next idea will be using one big hibiscus and less colors
Thank you for your critique again :)
Gendalf you are almost there... continue and dont give up!
I admire your will to make this logo, it's getting better, work on the flowers and the Islamic Tourism font, but definitely better.
It's definitely better than your first attempt. However this time it doesn't evoke any religious feeling.