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Anonymous (not verified) | Sun, 02/19/2012 - 23:52
I added some color - also some "shine" on the buttons.
also I added some extra shadow - just a bit on the left
not sure If I should add some white "shine" for the legs - one spot to each leg.. on the black.
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I also love to see it applied in a myriad of things...
this is much better but you have focused on the character in the middle and then neglected the "L and K". Possibly some more curved edges to match that of the character. And probably loose the shine on the black buttons as they will be impossible to see when scaled down.
I did changed the L K layout. I made the K a bit more curved - but I don't want to overdo it. also I did make a quick print on a card - I think its ok with the shine.
But no need to take the logo smaller than 5cm.. but eve if it does I can provide an alteration with no shine - that's the easy part. I think we all provide our logos in BnW, grayscale, without taglines eitherway. :)
ok then thats nice. well done.
nice. it's better.
why would you want to critique this if you already have this on the marketplace for sale as it is?
I find you very rude!!! I first upload it here to have some critique... after some alterations I finally uploaded the logo into stocklogos. But even if it was like your saying, "critique" will be always for helping designers to make their logos better. There is no "must" about the right time for a designer to ask for some critique. !!!
I take exception with the drop shadow (honestly, it reminds me of poop), but all the other elements look nice together.
I like the general idea and execution. My only suggestion would be to have the shadow under the figure not be solid black, but screen it back to about 30-50 percent and feather the edges to make it look more like an actual shadow. The two floating letters should also have smaller shadows beneath them.
Try "oval eyes"... good luck!!!
Thanks for the invite.
Seems there's another version of this logo, I haven't seen it. So I'm going to comment on this design only.
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As I usually say, I prefer not to vote rather than do a negative vote.
In general I think the logo has great intent, but it's not there yet.
I like the idea of the little robot character since it helps put a visual representation to the brand. I also like the color, because it makes me think this is a product or service for kids.
What doesn't work for me:
Although I like the robot character, it feels forced when combined with the logotype. The antennas look like nails driven into the robot's head, or like strings that allow the robot to "float" and represent the double O's... which are hard to see since the eyes don't have any design characteristics of the L and K typographically speaking.
I don't mean to get unpleasant by any means, but I see the robot being hanged and with his hands tied behind its back.
This gets accentuated by the "shadow" underneath it. Which, in all honesty, looks to me like a turd :p
The face of the robot looks lifeless, zombie-like, there's no emotion. Since I'm assuming this logo is for a kids' related product or service, I feel it needs some kind of expression.
The robot certainly looks like a robot kid.
The typography does look kiddish but there's something about the letters that it doesn't feel right. It may be the shine elements being so different from one letter to the other.
The shine and shadows are not bringing the impact to the logo as they should. If we put the robot by itself, the shines and shadows would make more sense, but because the L and K don't share the same effects, both shines and shadows from the whole design don't feel connected.
I see a lot of work here, with a bit more time and iterations this idea can become a nice looking logo.
Good work man.
Thank you.
It is fine job.
el personaje es un robot con cara de monitor, parecido a EVA "Wall·E" plasmar esos brazos cortos me hace pensar que es un Teddy Bear que solo sirve para acompañar, no me proyecta proactividad yo utilizaría solo la cara... y aplicaría un misterio al verlo en acción... como las cualidades del inspector Gadget.
Las piernas parecen pezuñas, mas que piernas metalicas.
It might be better without the robot body.