Loopin
callmeJ | Thu, 08/06/2015 - 13:05
Brief from client
a simple logo to communicate the idea of including your goals in your digital life/ digital loop
sorry for the overload, I'm wondering about the power of symbols now. This should be more powerful than just text.
6 Comments
I prefer the dot on the "I" a lot better on the other version. The way you've done the infinity symbol is nice here, but I would make the lines appear to continue on, just separated by an invisible line as I've mentioned in version 5. I'm not liking how they're cut off here.
This says Loopn. Being sneaky with letters hardly ever works. I prefer Version 5 with some kerning I think!
Plus, yes as Killer said, your infinity symbol now looks a bit off. It needs to flow under properly! Hold tight though, you are almost there!
I really like it maybe rework/refine the dots on top of the i as well as the infinity symbol
I like it. I tho it said LOOPIN before I clicked only to discover that the dot was on top of the N. Somehow it got my mind so clearly it works.
But just to be safe I do recommend adding the i clearly. But nice job.
What worries me is the way oo's are done - I somehow see an " x ". I agree with Waffles on " i " issue - I don't see it, sorry. With some fine tuning it will mature into a solid concept, good luck.
Get rid of the corn kernels. Remove the ascending bits in the "p" and "n" and make them more simple and round like the infinity loops.