M Halal Foods
Bariqo | Sun, 03/03/2013 - 06:40
Brief from client
He asked for the use of Red, White and yellow/Gold.
Use of black headed sheep found in East Africa.
I am posting the logo that I originally made several weeks back then I will post the new version. I hope I have improved hehehehehe. I personally like the new version. The client is not really a client but a close friend family.
1 Comments
I'm not sure what's new compared to the first version you posted a few weeks back.
The font still looks like it's been stretched, which is something you should never do.
The symbol is too simplistic. It looks like you just drew over a picture of a ship. You should really make it your own by spending more time to find a way to make it unique.
I guess the star symbol works, it gives the idea religious idea.
The composition is off balance, you didn't centered all the elements.