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Max Photos Studio
Marçal Mateus | Thu, 06/13/2013 - 17:27
Brief from client
Logo of my company. I will use with my personal name and your company name.
RGB presence detecte - good, eye and camera in the symbol - good. Your start is good but the symbol needs to be refined, more solid lines, not so playful, look for something tighter and smoother.
I'm not fond of pink and yellow on the same logo. I'd go for something milder in the middle. Overall it looks fantastic, and appears to convey the simplicity and efficiency (I assume) you were going for.
Take care of this: if you are a photographer and your company is committed to photography, this could be an over exposed logo and i recommend you to create something diverse, something that stands out of the others (easy thing, right? lol!), well, i mean, just try to look forward, just to demonstrate that you can offer that different thing that your costumers are looking for.
In the other hand:
Create a simpler flash, a more circled lens and a bolder eye's silhouette in a more compact symbol and you will be a bit near from a good logo.
It will have a text? if it, try to consider it into your design to treat it as a whole thing.
Sorry about my english, i'm looking for improve it every day! jajaja!
A good start. I think the lens should be horizontal rather than vertical to look more like an eye. Also I think there should be a balance between the thickness of your lines, the swoosh is light and sleek and the camera lines are bold and thick.
I like the fact the you rotate the yellow ellipse, it looks better, nut still the diferences in lines´ weights bothers me is a little too diverse ( I hope you get what i mean) specially in the part that the flash and the outer curves.
the outer curves seem too thin somehow look like they are not really part of the design.
Keep looking for the colors you feel right and maybe use some white circles in the cammera to give a little light to it and make it less heavy.
I like the fact the you rotate the yellow ellipse, it looks better, nut still the diferences in lines´ weights bothers me is a little too diverse ( I hope you get what i mean) specially in the part that the flash and the outer curves.
the outer curves seem too thin somehow look like they are not really part of the design.
Keep looking for the colors you feel right and maybe use some white circles in the cammera to give a little light to it and make it less heavy.
Hello, thank you
The lines I want to pass a message that are papedras eye.
I've changed the colors, even ones that could not please me.
But thank you, I'll redo again.
10 Comments
RGB presence detecte - good, eye and camera in the symbol - good. Your start is good but the symbol needs to be refined, more solid lines, not so playful, look for something tighter and smoother.
I'm not fond of pink and yellow on the same logo. I'd go for something milder in the middle. Overall it looks fantastic, and appears to convey the simplicity and efficiency (I assume) you were going for.
Take care of this: if you are a photographer and your company is committed to photography, this could be an over exposed logo and i recommend you to create something diverse, something that stands out of the others (easy thing, right? lol!), well, i mean, just try to look forward, just to demonstrate that you can offer that different thing that your costumers are looking for.
In the other hand:
Create a simpler flash, a more circled lens and a bolder eye's silhouette in a more compact symbol and you will be a bit near from a good logo.
It will have a text? if it, try to consider it into your design to treat it as a whole thing.
Sorry about my english, i'm looking for improve it every day! jajaja!
Hope this helps!
A good start. I think the lens should be horizontal rather than vertical to look more like an eye. Also I think there should be a balance between the thickness of your lines, the swoosh is light and sleek and the camera lines are bold and thick.
Hello, thanks for writing. Said so?
what do you think now?
Hello, I changed a bit, but still have not found the colors ideas, any comments?
Ideas?
I like the fact the you rotate the yellow ellipse, it looks better, nut still the diferences in lines´ weights bothers me is a little too diverse ( I hope you get what i mean) specially in the part that the flash and the outer curves.
the outer curves seem too thin somehow look like they are not really part of the design.
Keep looking for the colors you feel right and maybe use some white circles in the cammera to give a little light to it and make it less heavy.
Ok, thanks...
I like the fact the you rotate the yellow ellipse, it looks better, nut still the diferences in lines´ weights bothers me is a little too diverse ( I hope you get what i mean) specially in the part that the flash and the outer curves.
the outer curves seem too thin somehow look like they are not really part of the design.
Keep looking for the colors you feel right and maybe use some white circles in the cammera to give a little light to it and make it less heavy.
Hello, thank you
The lines I want to pass a message that are papedras eye.
I've changed the colors, even ones that could not please me.
But thank you, I'll redo again.