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mj
equie | Mon, 05/28/2012 - 23:15
Brief from client
Hello I'm testing options for my logo, this is one of them I am a graphic designer, I hope their views. Thanks :)
The M looks out of whack. if this was the look you were going for fair enough, but adulterate it more. It doesn't look like you've tried to do it, you want to make it look like it is deliberate. Colours are very pop art but the design is not, therefor it doesn't work well. The font you've used under the logo wrecks it completely.But I think over all the design direction has potential. It's very MTVish.
The colors are dated. The M and the J are not executed correctly. For instance, the bottom horizontal stroke is thicker than the vertical strokes of the letter. If you are going to use the text in a box, decrease the amount of space between the edges of the box and the text.
Says nothing about design or that you are a designer and that's not your signature, so why write it in a script font?. Not really a logo at all actually.
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me gusta el contraste de estos colores, me identifican
I like the colors... but I think you have to try again... Try diferent types
You didn't spend much time on this one, did you?
The M looks out of whack. if this was the look you were going for fair enough, but adulterate it more. It doesn't look like you've tried to do it, you want to make it look like it is deliberate. Colours are very pop art but the design is not, therefor it doesn't work well. The font you've used under the logo wrecks it completely.But I think over all the design direction has potential. It's very MTVish.
The colors are dated. The M and the J are not executed correctly. For instance, the bottom horizontal stroke is thicker than the vertical strokes of the letter. If you are going to use the text in a box, decrease the amount of space between the edges of the box and the text.
I dont like the whole look of this logo - Looks like Kindergarten cut-and-paste.
Says nothing about design or that you are a designer and that's not your signature, so why write it in a script font?. Not really a logo at all actually.
THE IDEA IS GOOD, BUT, IN MY OPINION, YOU NEEDS A SYMBOL AND CHANGE THE "MJ", AND USE ANOTHER TYPOGRAPHY
i say no to this one, everything looks off the M seems to have some issues with it and doesn't seem to be aligned properly?
No. This one needs to be done again. I think you can do much better than that.