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Niles, that's great, very funny and witty. Can you try placing the text below your icon and make the icon much smaller? Man i wish you helped me put some witty humour in my icon: http://www.brandsoftheworld.com/critique/mrmorph-3

lol!

this looks like a man with a phallic pencil, am I the only one hwo see that ?

I think "dirty" translates into vulgar. That would be fine if your demographic is in the 18-25 or less range. Or are you looking to achieve some kind of shock factor? If that's the case, you could make it a syringe / pencil combo and call it West Niles Virus Graphics

Dude. You impaled yourself on a pencil. That had to hurt. X |

I agree with 2423media. Phallic is vulgar. Vulgar attracts the less reliable, less savory folks. You can sell yourself short, so to speak, or you could come up with something much more creative.

If is sex products, ok...

thanks a lot every one : )

I don´t Like, esto es vulgar

It's great for year 5-7 high school to piss the teachers off.

It is a good idea for a t-shirt, but I would not have it as a logo to front my business. There is a small demographic that would find it amusing. In my opinion, you should be able to communicate with at least 90% of the population.

The "dirty" aspect is the most prominent of all aspects in this logo, instead of toning it down, which I don't like in your work.
The icon could be a little more abstract rather than making it too blatant. For eg. the color pink can sometimes mean erotica. The condom's shape is the simplest and most abstract form in this genre, in my opinion, with which, I hope, you can come up with great ideas!

This made me laugh. People on here have no sense of humor :(. I think the design is awesome and this would look really cool on a T-shirt.