pastry and coffee shop
spinnacer | Thu, 05/05/2016 - 00:13
Brief from client
Hi guys. Its been a long time since i dont update for critique, its a pleasure being here again :)
Let me know what you think about this concept. Any suggestion will be appreciated. Thank you. Cheers :)
5 Comments
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Welcome back! I'm liking this a lot but i cant make out what the symbol is in the A, this also causes the A to be slightly more bold than the other letters which is a little off putting
Nice to reed your coment once again :) thank you. The A corresponds to a hill with a stylized tree. Yes it looks bolder than the other letters. I must correct the font type. Thank you again :)
i think you need to work on that more as its too hard to tell that its a tree on a hill.
making a letter into a symbol is a nice idea and works well on bold text and words that have a small number of letters, In your case for this name of company where you have a few letters i dont think it works. I suggest you work on the symbol and take it out of the letter or have no symbol at all
Yeah, since the tree in that symbol is triangular, it's going to be difficult conveying that idea to others, since a triangular tree on a hill is probably the last thing they're going to think. I had a hard time figuring out what was going on with that A as well.