Piccoli passi
Macsimon | Sun, 12/16/2012 - 09:52
Brief from client
Create a brand for a family kindergarden called "piccoli passi" (little steps).
Client asked me something simple, fresh and full colored that remind to babyes footstamp and to the family love for the children.
4 Comments
I like the idea, but you have to work more on the final result. Try the thxt in caps.
Thank you very much.
I agree with you, but the budget was very restricted so the client was happy in this way!!!
I'll give a green thumb on the font, because it's kind of cute and bubbly like it probably should be for a kids line- but the rest of it is pretty rough. The stars and hearts littering the background (to me, anyway) is just a visual mess, the colors are far too bright (again, to me, anyway)- and I might like the symbol more if it wasn't cluttered together with all of the little symbols in the background. It sounds like it might be too late for changes, but I think this could be a lot better with different colors and without the little shapes hanging out around everything else.
Too much...