Brief from client
playcenter videojuegos
playcenter is the name of my game store/shop, i choose it from many drafts i do with similar names, then i decided it was almost properly for my store, same name are used in a roller coaster park in brazil, i hope you like it. The logo is simple, font only (font=die hund)
15 Comments
Either you center "play" with" center" or you put them on the same line,because in this form looks bad. The font it's pretty good but try to use less colors (you have 3 colors here and every color says something else, it divides the logo). Try "play center" in a single line and "video juegos" on a single line, every line with its own color, I guess it would be better. I gave thumbs up because it's about the way you organised the elements, but the logo still needs to be worked.
The font looks very appropriate for a play centre but the logo overall is not very inspiring. Why don't you want to use a symbol? Games are more and more 3D and interactive, why not give a bit of relief?
I agree with arthurmani, its not very exciting and futuristic. I don't know much about gaming, but I do know its more dynamic than that....the name is pretty dull too. Start again and think monsters, space ships and explosions.
Simple and effective. You don't need a symbol, the font already does the job.
Maybe put a little more space between the words, to let it breathe.
hmmm... this one is hard to critique... bouth shawali and arthurmani are right. Its not very inspiring... but like shawali said its simple and effective. Personaly I prefer something diferent.
listen what arthurmani says and 4gert about the version 2, that supernintendo's joystick is old fashion XD
Im inside the electronic eSports, it's a shop, so this is fine, and like Shawali said, the font does the job. The only think i change here is the videojuegos, it doesn't look good.
why "videojuegos" [videogames] looks bad for you manuel?, i put on the logo to "fill" it, do you think is "very obvious", thank u!!
Because it go from one end to another in the word center, and does seems pretty, but it's just my opinion.
Hard to critique I would say it works the video juegos looks off to me too maybe fix the spacing between them group the words together more
ex.
v i d e o j u e g o s
v i d e o (SPACE) j u e g o s <--- !
Thumbs up for simplicity - the other critiques are right, increase the space in the bottom line.
Nice one
excellent idea, maybe maximize the symbol
Were u see the symbol?
Steve_Fitz is dead right. Change the kerning everywhere, not just for "VIDEO JUEGOS"