Rage Sounds

The Idea and Concept is great!
Few ideas to maybe tweek it a bit.
maybe put the FM Radio Station under the "sounds"
So it looks nice n clean and not cutting into your cool rock hand.
other thing i'd mention is the font i like it but i don't love it!
play with all the fonts maybe having a lighter font for the FM Radio...
and a more clean font on the RAGE
other than that its looking real nice!

I think you should remove the arm and just have the hand? Maybe...

And change the fonts

I agree with what was said. It would remove the arm and just stay with the hand. The font has to be thicker, and perhaps a little grunge. FM align to the right in a thinner font.

The others posting here beat me to most of the things I was going to say... :-)
My only addition would be to try a smaller, cleaner font for the second line - say Gotham? Other than that and cutting the hand off at the wrist, I think it looks good.

I agree with slitting the wrist lol.... then align with the bottom of the letters. This will clear space away from the "S" in sounds... I would experiment on new typefaces as this one is too classic for me. I would also change the font or shift left or right the FM Radio underneath. It's a good look, but you're not there yet. Keep working at it!

I don't like it, considering your first work do not is bad, but, considering a development of one brand, it's poor. You must refine it, simplify it and make a unique and custom thing. The elements here are fighting and do not have any harmony. Try to do the icon off of the typography and take a tagline more close to the name of the brand, it will works.

works as a graphic design but not as a logo, and not as a brand identity. Try to simplify it and make it as one thing. try not to have interruptions like the hand has to come from somewhere.

I would go with just the hand and I would experiment with different fonts. THis font does not say RAGE at all.