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mcglontm | Tue, 08/21/2012 - 05:44
Brief from client
logo for the school year theme in my church youth group. will go on cards, tshirts, slides, etc.
Yep yep- that's the one thing that sticks out at me too- have the vine growing into the M like you do on the e! It needs to taper more and a part of the dark green leg of the M should be visible just like a part of the e is visible! (And I kind of agree that maybe you could pick more exciting colors!?!)
My only comment is that it doesn't look "youthful" like Graficouno said. I don't see a young group getting very excited about it and it seems a little delicate and/or feminine. What's the demographic of the group?
I agree with everything others said... I would just make the scripture a little smaller. Can't believe you got such good reviews on your first logo you put on here! Good job :)
6 Comments
I really liked it, what happens if you fusion the lines on the "M" the same as you did on the "e" it looks more profesional.
I loved,very clear and very direct but, its for a school of kids and young kinds? Because if this for childrens and young kids its some boring.
This is a great logo! Nice work!
I would like to see the "M" transition better like the E Besides that Great work! =)
Yep yep- that's the one thing that sticks out at me too- have the vine growing into the M like you do on the e! It needs to taper more and a part of the dark green leg of the M should be visible just like a part of the e is visible! (And I kind of agree that maybe you could pick more exciting colors!?!)
My only comment is that it doesn't look "youthful" like Graficouno said. I don't see a young group getting very excited about it and it seems a little delicate and/or feminine. What's the demographic of the group?
I agree with everything others said... I would just make the scripture a little smaller. Can't believe you got such good reviews on your first logo you put on here! Good job :)