Rising stars school logo
prabjiv | Wed, 11/30/2011 - 17:54
Brief from client
The client wanted the logo to be made with just 3 colours. They wanted a simple and a clear logo which talks about the valvues of their school which is truth knowledge and virture they wanted a star as well so that it represents the kids as the name of the school says it all RISING STARS
This is a logo made for a school which is in andhra pradesh. The client wanted the logo to be made with just 3 colours.
5 Comments
Sorry but I am not impressed.
There is too much going on here for my tastes. Colors are not really working for me. Both pieces look like clip art. I would try a new idea all together.
If you continue down this path I would suggest getting the two elements (circle and ribbon) tied together some how instead of separate. to help cut down on the busyness. Maybe lose the 3D effect on the star. or keep the star inner-shape the same.
No idea and poor execution. Nothing works here. Sorry
This is very bad and the problem is not your client asking you to use JUST 3 COLORS (this is really funny).
The problem is that you lack the skill and creativity to make a logo.
I am tired of repeating this but.... go buy some books on graphic and logo design and study hard, maybe it will help.
Try it in a crest with the ribbon at the bottom. Behind the larger star put 2 smaller - to the left and right. Get rid of the squiggle inside this will get lost if the logo goes any smaller and holds no real value. Like attached but the ribbon at the bottom.
But to talk about what you have done already, the colours are an odd choice, the star inside another star looks awful because they are different shapes and the 3D-ness to it isn't required.
Good luck.
Tell your clients that the only thing you can give them with 3 colors, some text, and a star is this:
Sure 'nuff, y'all.