rock star

Is this a line of clothing for Jewish rock stars? Nothing about this says rock and roll, it's definetly more mazeltov than Modest Mouse. Back to the drawingboard friend.

I concur with Benjamin. Looking at it tells me nothing about "gothic style." Are we referring to legitimate goths, punks, or what specific style? Gothics have their specific style that is replicated by other types of people. This says nothing about a gothic style. Like Benjamin said, the symbol you used is the Star of David. Is this a real clothing company? Do your research and come up with a relevant symbol/logo for them to use just for themselves and to appeal to their consumers. In other words, do your research and good ideas should come out of it, then there will be the need for a design and critique afterwards. Good luck.

The idea of Gothic is conveyed. More also, use your imagination a bit, would love to put on a shirt with these logo

There is no idea here. Rock is a very rich subject visually. You can do amazing logos with it.

Btw, only one logo is allowed per page. I fixed it for you.

doesn't work. i agree with all above comments. also the R in the rounded square reminds me of Rockstar Games logo, just missing the Star with the R but that star in the background. it does look like the Star of David.

You can't represent the gothic style using one "star" and Black and red colors, you must to find one way to represent it, differentially, and originally. You forced one idea about Rockstar Games, with symbols and shapes that doesn't work, sorry, but your can rethink it to be good.

mm you need to think more about what the brand means, you cannot just recurr to a star cause it reminds u to rock, the R means nothing and colors are terrible, try using more contrast b/w, red/white, i don't know.. there exist a whole gamma of colors, look for images, just write rock in the browser... you'll surely get good ideas, look to another logos, and use composition items, not just lines it looks monotonous and basic...

in addition it reminds me too much of this
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ROCKSTAR, not jewish star, c'mon now let's get creative... Not sure what inspired you to take this route but i see "FAIL"

I like the color RED, and that's about it... rock, star, mic, silhouette, captain america shield... get to work!!!

I'm sorry but nothing here fits at all. The Star of David is just telling me it's more occult based than Goth based. The type does not fit the brand imagery at all. The only thing close to it being Goth are the colors, and even that it doesn't seem right. Especially with black on grey, you can't see jack.

Back to the drawing board kiddo.