Rolando Maura Graphic Designer

I would work on the execution of the signature- one line- no shadows- one color.

The font for the tag doesn't work for me.

And I'm sorry to say this and it isn't personal against you/how you look-
but, the placement of the face half covered gives me a creepy feeling.
It looks like you are lurking- peeping in windows : P --sorry. Better you hear it here than have people feel that way and not tell you.

The design itself is unorganized. It looks messy. You should simplify it as much as possible. Maybe stick to one of your names and a simpler silhouette style illustration. Pay attention to proportion and organization.

hope this helps.

Too complex and unpleasant to look at. Sorry, not going to work.

I think it's too complex. Remove shadows and too many colors and it will be much better already.

I dont like the small font you chose along with the colors. For me it seems like there are to many things going on.