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Ooooooooh, no no no.... a.) I'm not sure two lines of text quite qualify as a logo!? b.) a really scripty font with a handwritten font just looks bad. I'm not sure what Suzanne does or whatever, but I don't think this works in any capacity. c.) Why is her name gray and the subtext is red and black- the subtext pops out at you more than her name.
Start over, be creative! And maybe try to incorporate something about what she does into the logo...

Anyone could have made this. Give us hardworking designers a good rep and change it up to beautify it and make it unique. Tweak the S and the V, pull the swashes out for example. You completely lose the tagline when viewed at a small size. Lose the handwritten tag and change it to sans-serif. Please, no comic sans either! Add more red and lose the gray. The swashes on the s and v are just begging for a heart or two to be thrown in there. I have no idea what Suzanne does based on this logo. Don't let our critiques get you down, keep at it and you will make something beautiful!