Saguaro clothing

This is far from being done, but it's off to a great start. I really like where this is going. Can't wait to see where you take it.

Good job! Keep it up!

Yes, this is looking great so far.

One thing I would suggest is to make the cactus shape more organic. At the moment it looks too perfect and rigid. The "S" is too angular in the center. Maybe make the "arms" asymmetrical. You could also consider putting little needles in there. This has heaps of potential!

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I really, really love the idea of this. Feel like a lot could be done to make it look less flat. But a fantastic base none the less.

I liked this one at first glance but totally read eSe (last e backwards).
After looking up the cactus perhaps you could slightly modify the S so it is different from the typed letter and skew the two arms as well as tighten the shapes up so the more resemble the arms of the cactus and not two ees or half of your S.

Also the arms are too big in comparison to the body. As of now. Again skew sizes. Look at the cactus.

Great start needs a final “up-touching” if you will to get it to the level it deserves.
Also, If you have any hand skills I wouldn’t shy away from a version with company name underneath. Not with a font.