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Im sorry if i sound harsh.
But this does not work at all,
The fonts are skewed badly, they spacing between the fonts are bad, the alignment is off.
the colors are... okay.
the effect on the boat is bad.
I would recommend starting fresh and making it a bit more modern fresh.
Try googling sailing logo's or something along those lines to get some ideas.
can't wait to see your revisions!
=) good luck!
there's a lot of space for better. "sailing on" is completely out of the film called "logotype". Choose another font , massive, no texture, make a ribbon and put it on . The yacht idea is ok but you have to choose something more clear ans smooth that this image. About colors, aren't good or bad but looking at the logo this is really the last of the problems.
Nothing works here...
You choose the worst font possible, The boat its horrible, and that golden/cyan circle is terrible. Please why dont you start all over again, trying to do something clean?
On top of all the great comments...this is just hard to look at from the bad colors, to bad and hard to read type, and image. Start again from the idea of clean and simple.
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Im sorry if i sound harsh.
But this does not work at all,
The fonts are skewed badly, they spacing between the fonts are bad, the alignment is off.
the colors are... okay.
the effect on the boat is bad.
I would recommend starting fresh and making it a bit more modern fresh.
Try googling sailing logo's or something along those lines to get some ideas.
can't wait to see your revisions!
=) good luck!
there's a lot of space for better. "sailing on" is completely out of the film called "logotype". Choose another font , massive, no texture, make a ribbon and put it on . The yacht idea is ok but you have to choose something more clear ans smooth that this image. About colors, aren't good or bad but looking at the logo this is really the last of the problems.
Eeew, this is one ugly logo.
First, never ever EVER distort a font.
Then, never ever EVER use Papyrus.
Also, don't use random photoshop effect juste because it looks cool (which it doesn't)
Nothing works here...
You choose the worst font possible, The boat its horrible, and that golden/cyan circle is terrible. Please why dont you start all over again, trying to do something clean?
This are just exemples of what you can do.
One more
In the exemple i wrote wrong... Biscayne not Biscane.
On top of all the great comments...this is just hard to look at from the bad colors, to bad and hard to read type, and image. Start again from the idea of clean and simple.
The type makes me a bit seasick, per all above.
No, start over
NEVER PAPYRUUUUUUS!!!!!
Papyrus = :(