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Seraphim
mikibr4@hotmail.com | Thu, 02/19/2015 - 12:50
Brief from client
Is a t-shirt shop and this is one of the names I thought.
I agree with TheKillswitch...the symbol looks like birds put together...is there a reason for that? I agree, I would lose the face and the black dots. The blue is way harsh. It is tough to have two very different san serif fonts. I would try doing the seraphim in the same font you used for camisetas. You can still play with it as you have. I don't mind the missing stroke on the R or the M, but I am not fond of the treatment for the H
seraphim are an angel class with three pairs of wings and these wings have eyes ...
As described in the Bible.
About the colors, composition and typography: I will try to improve them and look new criticism.
Well, ths symbol looks pretty stale. It's just the same diplucated wings and clumsily piled together. BTW, did you create the wing yourself? The expressionless face reinforce this impression.
The main font is a mess, mainly because of the terrible kerning. And the characters aren't in proportion with each other (that A is way too large) Overall its modern aspect doesn't match the classic look and feel of the symbol.
4 Comments
Can I see a version without the face and the little eyes on the wings? You might be on to something here. Maybe use a blue that is less harsh.
And maybe change the font on "Seraphim."
I agree with TheKillswitch...the symbol looks like birds put together...is there a reason for that? I agree, I would lose the face and the black dots. The blue is way harsh. It is tough to have two very different san serif fonts. I would try doing the seraphim in the same font you used for camisetas. You can still play with it as you have. I don't mind the missing stroke on the R or the M, but I am not fond of the treatment for the H
seraphim are an angel class with three pairs of wings and these wings have eyes ...
As described in the Bible.
About the colors, composition and typography: I will try to improve them and look new criticism.
Thank U.
(Translated by google)
Well, ths symbol looks pretty stale. It's just the same diplucated wings and clumsily piled together. BTW, did you create the wing yourself? The expressionless face reinforce this impression.
The main font is a mess, mainly because of the terrible kerning. And the characters aren't in proportion with each other (that A is way too large) Overall its modern aspect doesn't match the classic look and feel of the symbol.
And yes, that blue is painful to watch.
Good luck.